Monday, April 16, 2018

Feedback crit

Will ask for brief 7








Feedback on mockup sketches of poster

Does the logo represent the festival?
Go over sketch for poster, having a beach at bottom then rising up?
What illustration style?
Are the components exciting and get the message across its a music festival/holiday?
Fake line up or real line up?

A trend currently is a minimalistic but fun use of shapes on events and festival line ups
Image result for world island leeds
If i were to do it in this style but using festival components to make it more specific for the holiday/festival experience this would be appropriate.

FEEDBACK

Try both, as long as the 4 components come through. Illustrated would be more exciting and the lineup could even be around instead of covering the illustration as it's exciting.

The logo was agreed to work well with the design inserts to represent the festival- was even suggested these letters could work as icons for the wristband.

Will ask for brief 10


Anyone experiences of waiting rooms, group sessions relevant, what art was up?
Do they agree with current research being that pastels, soft shapes, symmetrical shapes would be appropriate?
How could I take this to next level?


For my last research brief I am aware I am in need of more primary research- those I emailed haven't all got back to me yet and I need to get more data to get the best results. This will be a great opportunity to get others opinions on the subject of design soothing those with mental health issues, and also a chance for them to come and talk to me if they have or know any experiences.





Going to post in mental health online forums for feedback internationally which will strengthen the outcome of the design.

Posted on- mentalhealthforum.net

FEEDBACK

-Look at existing themes
-Mockup interiors of a space or print/photograph the banners as they'd be
-All ideas work-perhaps create 3 different designs? Or make the leaf shapes soft in pastel colours to combine the findings of research
-Perhaps these designs can transfer to other components such as poster hand outs for the group, art therapy handbook/adult illustration
-Was given a research point made in Glasgow that showed in train stations, when they introduced a blue light, suicide rates were down 90%


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