Brief 5: Feedback from collaborator for Artpass

After showing the idea for basic grid layout for us to both use as the framework for further editing and illustration, she got back to me with the suggestion to amp up aspects and a way to include £5 aspect they want included, which I was unsure of.

When analysing their project design pack for rules about the art pass campaigns, it was allowed as long as the art pass sign was larger and not too close to the art fund logo at the bottom it can be bigger. She sent example mockups of the set.

Having this bigger emphasises their pass and makes the image less washed out using more space. My only worry is the tagline at top is overshadowed.

As a collaboration team we are doing really well in keeping in communication about each aspect and both having an input in all aspects!